Henry,
I thought that your organization of your paper was well
Put together and thoughtful. Your use of references to support your thoughts helped your argument against cyber bullying. Nice work!
Henry,
Wow, you took what was already a solid essay and made it even stronger. I am so proud of the hard work you dedicated to One World and your essay. Your evidence is very strong– I especially like the comparison you make to cyberbullying incidents today versus a few years ago. Overall, you make such a compelling argument on such an important topic. .Well done, Henry! You should feel very proud!
Ms. Takacs
Great job, Henry! I am so proud of the work you put in week after week and it really shows in the research that you have in your final product.
Henry,
I thought that your organization of your paper was well
Put together and thoughtful. Your use of references to support your thoughts helped your argument against cyber bullying. Nice work!
Great job Henry!
Henry,
Wow, you took what was already a solid essay and made it even stronger. I am so proud of the hard work you dedicated to One World and your essay. Your evidence is very strong– I especially like the comparison you make to cyberbullying incidents today versus a few years ago. Overall, you make such a compelling argument on such an important topic. .Well done, Henry! You should feel very proud!
Ms. Takacs